[Fanfic]The story of an orphan [CHAPTER 121 UP :D]

[nintendojo93]

Hello! My name is Joby, and in 2007 I started this story, just really trying to find out if I was any good at this story. I really enjoyed writing, so I continued, and now it's three years later, and my longest running story, now over 100 000 words! =) It made me feel so great, giving you guys something fun to read and hearing your comments, gives me an urge to continue!

This story is about a little girl named Joby, who is left alone by her friends, because of them leaving for training in Flarine. Her parents never taught her how to fight, so she had to fend for herself. This doesn't go very well, though, as her town gets attacked the same night.
In the mean time, an 18-year-old Elementor passes over her town, curious because of the magic he can feel in the area. Once he sees what's going on, he quickly takes action and saves the little girl from the fire and destruction. This elementor is named Darren.
Joby and Darren stick together, and make a whole bunch of friends, whilst developing their relationship from master and apprentice to maybe even more.
Now, years later, they find themselves in a fight that goes farther than even Roika itself!

This story was my first story ever, and I started it when I was thirteen, so quite a while ago. I've got a feeling that my writing skills have improved quite a bit since the beginning, but I prefer not to rewrite pieces, since they can't be the same as they were before. So please don't mind spelling mistakes, etcetera! =)
Book two - When a group grows closer Ch 48 t/m Ch 80
Book three - When an unknown power strikes Ch 80 t/m ABOUT ch 130

November : Up till chapter 121
9 april ♥ NOW UP TO CHAPTER 113 ♥
26 feb ♥ NOW UP TO CHAPTER 106 ♥
Update homepage, chapters 80+
[15-1-2008]/[16-1-2008] Chapters 67-76
[22-9-2007] -> [22-10-2007] Chapter 63-67
[20/21-9-2007] Chapter 61-62, update homepage
[9-9-2007]Chapter 55-60
[20-7-2007] Chapter 54
[19-7-2007] Chapter 53
[18-7-2007] Chapter 52
[17-7-2007] Chapters 44-51
[29-7-2007] Chappy 43-44
[28-7-2007] Chapter 42
[26-7-2007] -Chappy 40-41- Fan recognition! Thanks to all my readers<3 -tear-
[25-7-2007] Chappy 39
[24-7-2007]Chapter 37-38
[23-7-2007]Chapter 35-36
[30-6-2007] 31-34, drawings
->roland->joby-> arashi
[28-6-2007] Chapter 30
[27-6-2007] Chapter 29
[26-6-2007] Chapter 28
[26-6-2007] Drawings: =]clicky~clicky~
[24-6-2007] Chapter 27

Flyff: Darkness approaches - by Trunks1138!
Flyff: War is at hand - by Trunks1138 (Its the sequel! Go read it nao! :3)
The story of Lokuri's adventures - by lokuri! First story I ever read here, and I like it alot!
A double love - by accouid
Crestfallen - by Nerraeternia
Mission Probable - By siblingrivalry ^^ One of my very favorites =D I'm looking for the link now..

Joby Wollyns (Joow-Bie Wo-liehns)
Age: 16 years old
Personality : Joby could be described as a calm person. For her age, she's quite mature, and she's the protagonist in this story. She's quite fond of all her friends. She has special powers you'll read about later in the story.
Looks: Joby has dark brown eyes, along with her hair. Her skin is a little darker then the rest, what makes her look like she's from the tropical areas of Roika. As a little girl she wore glasses, but stopped wearing them as they kept breaking. She wears about anything that's feminine and cute, and plans to be an elementor as well.

Darren McKinns
Age: 18 years old
Personality: You could descibe Darren as calm and rational. He doesn't just jump into situations without thinking. He's very protective of all people dear to him.
Looks: His hair color changes, first green, then its natural color, brown. It's quite curly as well, and almost reaches his shoulders. He has green eyes, and wears elementor clothes.

Roland Kingsly
Age: 18 1/2 years old
Personality: Roland's a ringmaster, one of Darrens best friends since they were children. He usually is happy, makes jokes, but can be more mature at times. He's older then Darren, and used to assist his father at the hospital of Flarine.
Looks: He has brown-blond hair, that changes throughout the story. His eyes are yellow-brown, going along with his hair. He usually wears CS outfits, like uniform and tuxuedos.

Vlainina Falun (Fae-lun)
Age: 17 1/2 years old
Personality: Vlanina meets the group through training Joby in her beginning mage years. She eventually becomes good friends with all of them and joins in their journey. She's a mage, but hasn't had her chance yet to change jobs. She's serious and sometimes worried, but friendly as well.
Looks:Vlanina usually wears dresses with blue, hats as well. Her hair is long and brown, usually in a braid down her back.

Lulu Everlee ( Eh-verr-leeh)
Age: 16 years old
Personality: Cheerful, a good friend. She meets Joby by saving her once, and is childhood friends with her. They discover that later though. Her best buddy is Agrorro, who she knew since they were crawling. She's a mage, planning to be an elementor.
Looks: Lulu has silvery white hair, that's usually tied in two pigtails. She wears mage clothes, usually her misty set, but sometimes dresses and other outfits.

Agrorro Emerson (Eeh-mer-son)
Age: 16 1/2 years old
Personality: Calm, peaceful person. Much like Darren in personality. He joins the group after being saved by them all, and leaves to work at the HQ at later times.
Looks: Blue, aqua hair color, and eyes changing in color. His hair is short and sticks up in the back. He's a psykeeper.

Arashi Ryuu (Er-you)
Age: 18 years old
Personality: Quiet, distant person. He's Darren's best childhood friend, but lost his parents, and that turned him depressed at times. When he's with the group though, he's happier and likes to talk.
Looks: Long, black hair, his bangs covering one eye. He usually wears elementor suits, painted black, or uniform suit.

Sasuke Garrow (Gahr-row)
Age: 18 years old
Personality: Calm, sometimes arrogant. Meets the group though later reasons (I'll spoil too much if I tell you)
Looks: Blond hair, grey eyes.

Eiene Garnet (Ay-ie-nee)
Age: ??? (Revealed later)
Personality: Much like Roland. Cheerful, a little more serious though. More on him you should be able to read in the story, or I'll spoil it =D
Looks: Silver hair, sometimes long, sometimes short. He wears thin-shaped glasses.

Vanessa Hughes (Hugh-ees)
Age: 17 years old
Personality: Calm, gentle personality. Someone who has difficulty in trusting people to tell them all her secrets. She's very caring for her friends, and meets them when they first discover the crystals.
Looks: Long silver hair and sapphire blue eyes . She's a ringmaster.

Torch Madison (Mah-di-son)
Age: 16 1/2 years old
Personality: Torch is a quite active girl. She's friends with Vanessa, and meets the group at the same time as her. She lived in Death Island with her parents a long time ago, but moved to Flaris once she became a vagrant.
Looks: Color-changing hair along with her mood.

Kashi Irashire (Kah-shi I-rah-shi-ray)
Age: 18 years old
Personality: Not in the story alot yet =3
Looks: Brown straight mid-long hair, and blue eyes. Slightly tanned skin..

Trunks Browyn (Do you like it? :O)
Age: 18 years old
Personality: Serious, and sometimes cheerful. Trunks works at the HQ, managing speed vehicles (Boards and brooms). He joins in in a mission far from the rest of the world, along with some others of the gang.
Looks: Tan skin, and billposter outfit, but in parties and when he works at the HQ he either wears a uniform or at a party a tuxuedo. He has blonde/brownish hair and deep blue eyes that when you stare into them you wonder what's going on in his head. (Written by Trunks himself

[nintendojo93]

Well hi everyone! This is my first story since about 5 years ago and I wrote a few chapters to begin.. I'd love to have comment so I can improve my writing and stuff! Have fun reading PS Dont let the amount of text frighten you haha n_n I just wrote alot today , I would love to have people read it! Even if you read only half of the story, comment please!

Here is the first chapter, I have the next two on my computer downstairs..
~Chapter one~
As long as Joby remembered, she was an orphan. She strangely had completely no memory of her parents, and always walked around the woods ,where she lived ,and got food and toys from her friends en neighbours. Because she had no parents, she never learned how to fight, and unlike most, she couldn't become a fighter for Roika. So all of her friends left and became vagrants. She was left alone, she wouldn't even try the exam to become a fighter.. She was so sure she would fail.. Her friends didn't want to leave her, but they had to leave for the island of Flaris with their parents.. They looked back, seeing the little girl walk back home, to a village without people..

After spending the day finding food on her own, Joby gave up finding even more then a few small mushrooms and tried to go to sleep in a bush nearby. She spread a blanket out on the floor and put the rest of her stuff there aswell. Thinking of her only support and friends, who had left for the island of Flaris, she started crying, and finally went to after a few minutes, never knowing what would happen while she was sleeping.. Joby woke up in what seemingly looked like a dream to her. It was unlike any dream she ever had, though.. Monsters of all sizes invaded her hometown, wrecking everything and setting it on fire. She tried to stay calm with the thought that it was only a dream, but something told her there was something wrong with this dream. Was she even dreaming?! She decided to take it for the best and she attacked one of the blue, bat-like monsters. It head-butted her and sent her flying , and she thought "How can such a small thing be so strong?! " After being hit and landing on her back, she lost consciousness. When she woke up, she looked into a pair of green eyes. She nearly yelled in shock, but instead ,she asked "Where am I?"
The person answered "Welkom to Flarine, the capital of Flaris."

~Chapter two~
"Oh my god!" screamed Joby, who wasn't prepared for fighting at all and panicked. "I don't know how to fight! I dont know what to do! I can't fight at all! I never learned from my parents.." Now just realizing she was screaming, and looked at her savior blushing. "Sorry.. I just panicked a little, excuse me for screaming.." Now looking at the guy in the long robes, she noticed he was kind of handsome, making her even more shy. She examined him better and noticed he was wearing a long, brown jacket, and a hat with a feather in the same color. He was wearing some kind of suit in the same shade of brown. His hair ; contrasting with his clothes, was curly and lime green. It looked funny and Joby couldn't help but giggle. "What is your name?" She asked the guy but the only thing he said was : "I'll tell you later. The most I can tell you now is that I'm an elementor. What's your name?" He tilted his head sidewards and looked at Joby. While he looked at her, she asked herself : "Am I still blushing? I cant talk normally to a guy like this!?" He asked her again what her name was and she answered ; "Erm ... Im Jo..Joby. Nice to meet you, elementor sir! " She smiled and her eyes met his for a second. His eyes were as green as his hair and were a beautiful shade of light green. He looked at her and said ; "You are free to use the bathroom to freshen up, after that I will teach you how to fight in this world. She mumbled a thanks and went to the bathroom, a few rooms farther. She looked at herself in the mirror, and she couldn't help but say "I look horrible.. " She washed her face and noticed a big bruise on her head. She looked for something to camouflage, and found some star candy. It looked so yummy ,and she couldn't help but take a bite. She nearly spit it all out in shock ,because the candy turned out to be totally filled with sugar, but when she looked at her hear, the bruise was gone. She washed her dark brown curly hair and put it in two pony tails. Her hair was as dark brown as her eyes. Her eyes weren't just a shade of brown, they were so brown that they nearly were black. On her left arm she had a mark, it never would wash off, and she never saw someone else with it; After freshening up, she saw that her clothes looked more like rags. She saw a box in the closet next to the bathtub, and got curious. She opened it and found a beautiful pink outfit. She put it on and just adored the look of it, but she didn't want to make it dirty! So she folded it and put it into her backpack. In the bottom of the box she found a more durable looking outfit. Now she was ready to go! When she entered the living room, she found a note on the door ; "Take a bundle of candy and meet me in the garden for your lessons " She noticed the fine handwriting on the note, it looked like calligraphy.. She took of the note and noticed there was a ring stuck on the back of the note. She put it on her finger, just knowing it was for her. Then she walked to the garden. Here the elementor was waiting for her. Next to him she saw a shiny sword-like thing, and a shield that looked very shiny aswell. He said: "Grab that sword and shield and try killing that bat, if you please." When she turned around to look at her enemy; she saw in shock it was one of the same creatures that had head-butted her and sent her flying earlier in her dream. She didn't want to look like a little kid, so she charged the bat and, with one hit, cut it in half. After that she felt more confident and picked up the lolly the dead bat had dropped. "Wow, that wasn't hard at all! " She said with a huge grin on her face. The elementor just smiled. He said to himself; "I know it now.." After fighting for a whole day, she followed the elementor back home and fell asleep on the couch. And so they went on for a few more days. The fifth day she made a huge mistake. She saw boys walking around, when she went for a walk in the hills, in striped shirts and she did not know the difference between human-like monsters and real people , she ran and tried to talk to them. The horde of boys charged her, and one managed to stab her arm with a fork he always was holding. She fell unconscious again, as she was hit on the only place in her body that could be fatal to her....

Get ready for chapter three!

[nintendojo93]

~Chapter three~
When she finally came to, she looked in the worried eyes of the elementor. He had saved her just on time and had waited by her side till she woke up, for about a day since she got hit on her family mark, what seemed to be a very sensitive spot.. "Joby, are yyou okay?!" he nearly shouted when she opened her eyes. "Yes.. Im fine, what happened? Why is my shoulder hurting so bad?" she asked. "Its a wound from the Demian that attacked you, and I cant heal it in some way.. We need more advanced healing techniques.." he answered. "Im fine! I'm ready to fight again! Its just a scratch on my schoulder, it can't be so bad !" and she tried to stand and fell again. "Well I see you cant even stand, so lets find some people to help." Since Joby lived here, she never saw another person then the elementor, and was anxious to meet others. "Well, since you cant walk, I'll have to carry you there, are you okay with that?" Thinking of how that would be, Joby blushed and said "Er.. okay that's okay hehe..." After this the elementor picked her up, but he couldn't help but notice she was nearly as light as a feather, what worried him a little. He walked for hours and hours but couldnt find a single person. So then he pulled out a board and put it on. He had never tried to fly without hands before but he thought it would be fine. He stepped on the board and took off. Joby closed her eyes in fear, not knowing what would happen next. When she looked around her, she could see the clouds and she suddenly felt calm. She stuck out her hand and stuffed a little bit of the magical clouds around her in her pocket. When they descended, she could -for the first time in a long time- see people! Not people who stab you, but talking people who actually make jokes and have fun! She grinned and started waving -with her arm that wasnt hurt- at the people who she saw. When they landed, the elementor stuffed his board back in his pocket -what Joby found kind of strange since the board was nearly her size- and layed her down on the ground. Soon a boy with a wierd-looking stick came running . "DARREN, DARREN IS IT REALLY YOU!?" he yelled and Joby looked at Darren in suprise. "Why wouldnt you tell me your name was Darren? I like the name. its a pretty name" she said and smiled. Darren said nothing, but just smiled. The guy with the stick ran over and started introducing himself. "Oh hi little girl! I'm Roland." "Whats your name? What happened to you?" "I'm Joby",she said."I got stabbed by a Demian but my arm wont get better and it hurts so much I cant stand!" "I'm sure I can help" Roland said and he started turning the stick-weapon and whispered spells. Suddenly Joby felt all warm inside and she felt her arm heal. "Hmm.. this is a wierd sort of wound" Roland said. "I cant totally heal it! This is the best I can do, sorry" Joby was ready to fight anyway so she stood up. She told Darren "Well, can I fight here? Am I strong enough? Tell me! " Darren would rather keep her safe in the woods but he wanted to see her happy so he said "It's fine. We'll stay at Rolands house in the meantime and I think you can take those monsters." He pointed at some plant-looking monsters further on. "Those are Feferns, and they are a little stronger then you. I think you can take them though" he said and winked. "I'm going to talk to Roland for a while, I'll check on you in a bit." Joby walked over to the monsters and two-hit killed them. She picked up the foods the monster dropped and started killing more and more, feeling stronger every time. After a few hours, Darren came back with a present!
"I'm sure that you'll be strong enough to class change in a few days, so I brought you some stuff." He showed her a picture book with classes that she could become and the outfits and weapons. She immediantely looked at the elementor part, and pointed at the earlier class; the Mage. "I got it! Im going to be a mage, and then an elementor just like you, Darren!" she said with a huge grin. Darren grinned "Just as I thought!" He handed her a bag with some clothes she could wear and as a suprise, he gave her a staff that looked identical to his. "Wow! Arent you much stronger then me Darren? How could I use this staff!". "It's a secret" Darren said, and no problem!
"Now get back to training, you" he said with a huge grin on his face.

[nintendojo93]

~Chapter 4~
Joby instantanously started training again, happy with the thought that she would get to use Darren's staff and wear new clothes and new spells and even more! "Im so lucky" she thought whilst she slashed the feferns. "I met Darren who helped me and trained me. He gave me food and clothes and has been so nice to me! But I never even thought about why someone would be so kind, why is he helping me, why?!"
The thought of something wierd about her made her uneasy. "He's just a great person to help me, and he's my best friend". After thinking about that she got more calm again and went on grinding. After feeling so strong the feferns were too easy for her, she went to look for Darren. After looking for some time she saw him. He was sitting on a hill nearby, looking at the clouds. His green hair was waving in the wind and the orange color of the sunset made him look like he was glowing. His green eyes had the reflection of the sun in it. "How can he look into the sun like that.. " She asked herself, but she didnt feel like asking. He looked handsome like ever while sitting there, and it made her even more shy when she silently climbed the hill and sat next to him. She looked at what he was sitting on, it even had a basket with food on it! "Err.. hi" She said. "I think I'm finally strong enough" she whispered. He didnt answer for a minute before apologising. "Ah , sorry. I just find the sun so beautiful, and I love looking at it from here. It's like going to another world.. I brought a picknick basket for us Joby"
Joby said "So that's what it is! Oh thats so much fun, thanks Darren!" Seeing this girl get so happy for something small like that made him a little sad, but he looked at her; she looked beautiful in the sunset.. "I musn't get feelings for her, it will be too hard when our ways will part.." He said to himself, but couldnt help getting a liking to Joby (that found star candy with a shout of glee "YAY!")
After eating and drinking Darren and Joby went to look for Roland. Finally they found him buffing a rather rude vagrant "BUFF PLZ NOW" . Darren had to laugh seeing this sight and he walked over to Roland and the vagrant. "Having fun Ro?" he asked. That question Roland answered with a look that made Joby shiver. "Ah dont take it so seriously, Ro, your scaring Jo over here". After these words Roland finished buffed the vagrant and smiled so broad it looked unnatural! "They are getting more rude and rude.. its a shame, Joby, be nice when you ask an assist for buffs please!" "Well, are you ready to go home? Oh I see Joby is ready for her class change, lets have a good night sleep and help you with the change tomorrow. Follow me!" They walked through the fields straight to town. Joby saw that some of the monsters went to sleep, and saw a little pink bat flying lonely on top of a hill. "Darren, can I take that Aibatt home? He looks so lonely!". Darren just smiled. "I guess thats a yes!" She ran over to the bat and gave him some candy. After that the bat followed her all the way home. Roland opened the lock to his house and showed Darren and Joby their room. "Sorry, I only have one guest room at the moment, there are two beds, and the bathroom is this way. "You sound like a hotel owner" Darren said. To make it even more Roland said "Have A nice stay!" With his typical huge grin. Darren looked over to Joby, she already fell asleep.. "Well I guess she had a hard day, poor girl.." He walked over to her, looked at her and kissed her forehead. Good night, little mage."

I just started this story today, I'm addicted haha xD I might be able to add people to the story at this point , say about five people or so? Post if you're interested. I'd love to have comments please!
IGN : NintendoJo93
Server: Aibatt

[nintendojo93]

~Chapter 5~
"YAAWN" Joby said as she woke up in her linnen covers. She was wearing her pink pyama and had braided her hair. She looked at her clock "Oh my gosh, its only 6 o'clock!" She looked around the room. "Oh, now I remember, we're staying at Ro's house." She looked to her left and saw Darren quietly sleeping in his bed. His green hair looked messy as ever and she couldnt help but giggle. She quietly walked over and looked at him. Then she noticed something "Hahaa he wears blue pj's with little aibatts on it! Soo cute!" I wonder if he has other secrets like that " She smiled to herself. She decided she would take her time and freshen up. She quietly opened the door and went to the bathroom. She showered and looked in the mirror, like usual. She was sick of the usual ponytails; she braided her hair in the back and put on her vagrant outfit. She filled her backpack with candy and brushed her teeth. Then she walked back to the bedroom. She opened another door there and found a balcony with beautiful roses and butterflies. "I wouldnt have expected Ro to like roses this much! It's very pretty though!" She smiled and looked as the sun came up. After sitting there for about 15 minutes, Darren quietly stepped out of bed and jumped up next to her. "Good morning Jo! Had a good night sleep?" "Kind of.. I woke up at six, so tired now.."
She looked at Darren and saw him actually still in his aibatt pj's and holding the little pink aibatt she saved the day before! "I think we should name him!" Darren said. Then, suprisingely, they both shouted out "I know! His name will be Squeaky!" after that they looked at eachother in suprise and Darren said, "So it will be. His name will be Squeaky." "If you'll excuse me, I have to get ready for your class change!" After these words he left the balkony. After he was finished they went downstairs together and started breakfast. After breakfast, the trio, Roland, Joby and Darren left for the fields of Saint morning.

Maybe I'll write later today, dont be scared from the amount of text please! I really would love to get comment (beg beg xD)
Even if its negative, it might help me write better in the future
Sooo comment away!

[flouud]

can i be in it =0

IGN: Vlanina

Job: Mage

Server: Mia

Level: um Karla knows o.o;

[lulu0123]

Can I be in it too?

Mage

IGN PrincessLulu

Lvl 56 Future Elementer

Mushpoie

Gettin a Pic of me will add in 5mins when it uploads =)

[nintendojo93]

-Chapter 6-
When they finally reached the sea, Joby saw an island far away. It looked way bigger then Flaris. "Darren, is that Saint Morning? " "Yes Jo, that is. And that island to the left is Darkon. I advise not to go there, since it's dangerous and very strong monsters live there. Well, lets go then I guess!"
Both Darren and Roland pulled out a blue Ignice board and stepped on. Joby hopped on the back of Darren's board and held on to his robe. It was a whole new experience to fly over sea, and she couldn't help but be a little frightened. "Darren? Please don't go too fast, Im kind of scared" she whispered. Darren looked her in the eyes and said; "It'll be fine, just hold on, and I wont go too fast for you.. okay? I can carry you if you're scared of falling off, just give the word!". These calming words brought Joby to her senses and she said "I'm fine, thanks! Time to be a mage I guess!" They flew and flew, over the sea. The island didn't seem to get closer in Joby's eyes, but she found it rude to comment on it. They got there anyway and Darren & Roland brought her to the mage trainer. He gave her a load of quests she succeeded and they took her to the last part; the horrid Seido! Still, Joby killed it in 5 hits.. she went back to the trainer and finished her quest. She felt glowy inside and felt her brain rearrange. Instead of the vagrant hits and skills she now saw skills with fire, ice and water possess her and she learned the skills that were now part of her. Getting back to her senses she said : "I'm a mage now! It feels great. Thanks for the help so much!" She told Darren, Ro and the mage trainer. "Let me change clothes now.." In stead of her normal mage clothes, she looked in her backpack for her pink outfit. It strangely wasnt wrinkled at all, and still was beautiful. "I cant wear what Darren gave me yet, I just feel I'm not strong enough." She walked out and faced Darren. He looked at her; She looked pretty in her pink hat and dress, holding a twinkling gold staff that he had given her. He just stood in awe before getting back to his senses. "Wow, that outfit looks great on you!" Roland said with his typical huge grin. I want to introduce you to a mage friend of mine, hop on your boards and we'll go look for her!"
Joby hopped on Darren's board and held on again. They flew over a few mountains before reaching the Totemias. These were monsters who looked like they were built up out of blocks, with a sort of scary face on them.. In the middle was a mage in blue fighting a over-sized Totemia. The group landed before shouting; "Hello Vlanina! Can you help us train a little newbie mage?" Vlanina killed the Totemia and walked to them. "Sure I can! What's your name, little mage?"

I added you in , Vlanina What do you think of the storyline?
By the way, I'll take one or two more people in the story, first come, first serve! Please vote in the poll hehe n_n
EDIT: I'll add you in aswell, lulu But not at the moment, I'll add you when Joby is a little higher level Sorry to let you wait!

[flouud]

lol i'm around level 40 o.o

[nintendojo93]

Hehe, but you were in a Reana set, thats close to level 40 right? n__n Anyway, I'll get you higher whilst the story goes on
Do you like the idea of you training Joby? ^^'

[flouud]

yes n.n

T.t

moar its got a really thick storyline lol

[cheepee]

well hi
hey im a drawer and im lookin for a story to draw ;p
and i was wondering
would you like it if i draw ur story

here you got some example's i made on school
http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u128 ... gen029.jpg
http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u128 ... gen030.jpg
well i hope u want it

and i like the story go on!
-xxx-
Micka the Billposter

[nintendojo93]

X3 any tips? I just write what comes up in me

[flouud]

umm

lol i'm half dragon so um

people can ride on me x.X

[lulu0123]

Woo here's me! Except it's not updated..my pics are going somewhere else now O.o i check capture they're gone...Anyway here's the nearest updated me! Just imagine that suit with good glow and bunni ears and white pigtails lol

P.S. Ignore the lil chatbox in the right hand corner xD

P.P.S. I fight elderguards =D

[nintendojo93]

All this nice comment just makes me glow inside hehe! I would love it if you draw my story! And are you dutch? I am aswell
I'll find a way to show your dragon powers in the story Vlanina!
I'm sure it'll be very interesting Andd... Heres chapter 7 already! And lulu , thanks for your picture! I'll get you in the story, Im sure Any 'special powers' you have?

-Chapter 7-
"My name is Joby" Joby said with a huge smile. The girl was wearing a blue set, with a hat that carried a bell that made a noise everytime Vlanina moved. "What a nice name" Vlanina said, and couldnt help noticing the rather unusual staff Joby was carrying. "Are you ready for a hard and rough and long training? " Vlanina said with a wink. "Em.. I guess so" Joby said, hoping she was joking at least a little bit.. "Okay, we'll start in an hour." Joby took this time to say goodbye to Roland and Darren, who were going back to Flaris in half an hour. "How do I get back?!" Joby asked. "I'm sure you will be able to fly back on your own, otherwise just stay at Vlaninas and wait till I get you. By the way, when you think you can fly press that button on your staff.." Darren whispered in Jobys ear. "GOODBYYEEE!!" Roland yelled whilst they flew back. Joby waved till they were out of view and thought she would really have to get used to them not being there, especially Darren.. "So, litte mage, what element would you like to learn first? " Vlanina asked her. Thinking of the sunset, she said "I would love to learn fire first, it looks so beautiful and has the color of the sun.." "Okay, fire it is then!" Vlanina led her to a open space where she put a dummy totemia. "Okay.. here we go.. think of the sunset, candles , everything with fire that comes to you. Feel it burn inside you and read the secret of the spell.. ". Joby closed her eyes and thought of the sunset. Thinking of that, she remembered how handsome Darren looked then.. "NO! Dont think of Darren now , you're training!" Still thinking of the sunset, she felt it burn inside her. She suddenly, like automatism, poined her staff at the totemia and yelled soundless words. A ball of fire erupted from her staff and hit the dummy. It burned to ashes.
"Thats great for a beginner!" Vlanina said. "Now do that a few times more, than youre ready for the next element!"

[flouud]

so i have to deal with a lovesick person? xD

[flouud]

lawls

OHNOES AN AIBATT

*ducks*

[lulu0123]

Don't forget me =D Look at my pic
[Sorri it takes aloota space lmao]

[nintendojo93]

Ha ha I guess so! Shes lovesick at the moment yes xD Lets hope it'll get less I'm gonna start on chapter eight now *tries to find inspiration somewhere*

[lulu0123]

I've stretched the entire post...SILLY ME ^.~

[lulu0123]

Haha I have found the pic...I'm just gonna put a link this time lol xD

I will edit and put the link when it's uploaded.
^.~

[lulu0123]

Yay! Glad you don't mind should I just post the pic? I dunno how to get the link for it to be honest

[nintendojo93]

Hehe its no problem n_n I like people commenting and I like the thread growing mwahaha xD Im on about one fifth of chapter 8
I think I'll have it finished soon :33

[nintendojo93]

I'm fine either ways, but when you know how to post a link, could you please? I dont mind so much, so dont worry about it I think I; m addicted to story writing already xD